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Manuscript Evaluation

What is a manuscript evaluation?

A manuscript evaluation gives you a high-level look at character development, plot, pacing, dialogue, genre, and other elements that are incorporated in well-told stories. Do these questions sound familiar?

  • Does your story start off compelling but struggle to drive the reader through the middle, and you’re unsure how to fix it?
  • Have you had feedback that you have plot holes, but aren’t sure where they are?
  • Is something not working in your story or your characters feel flat?
  • Do you have a full manuscript, and want an evaluation to make sure it’s ready to send to agents?
  • Not sure if the story is tight and well-written?
  • Are you getting interest from agents, but not hearing back or not getting the response you want?


The investment in a Manuscript Evaluation package is $1600 for manuscripts up to 80,000 words and includes:

  • an initial kickoff call to hear what your concerns are, but also to talk through any cryptic feedback you’ve received
  • a complete read of your finished manuscript (this service does not include inline comments or editing)
  • a detailed editorial letter clearly outlining:
    • a prioritized and detailed list of action steps to make improvements
    • suggestions on possible solutions
    • the strengths of your story and writing
  • a 90-minute, one-on-one call with me to go over any questions on feedback, brainstorm, and make sure you feel confident moving forward in revision so your manuscript shines

Manuscript evaluations usually take 30–45 days to complete from the start date. Availability can be limited, so fill out this form, then I’ll reach out to schedule a call.

*For longer manuscripts, price increases $200 per 10,000 words

**Prices are subject to change without advanced notice.

Benefits of a manuscript evaluation

While having a critique partner or a friend read through your manuscript can offer feedback, often times you won’t get solid feedback that helps you identify exactly how to fix issues that may plague your manuscript.

Each manuscript I’ve worked on has been unique. Just the same, each story has been through a different level of refinement. Only you can tell the story that’s in your mind. I want to help you do just that through curiosity.

My feedback will incorporate questions that will:

  • fill in story gaps
  • develop characters who come across a little flat
  • help identify if you’re starting in the right place
  • help you know if your characters match with the character’s age and voice accurately
  • know how to identify unnecessary subplots
  • any other improvement so your story shines

Ultimately, I want you to feel confident in moving forward in revising your story.

Do you need help with your manuscript?

Click the button below, tell me about your story, and I’ll reach out within the next two business days to schedule a no-obligation call. I’m looking forward to learning more from you.

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